Part VII 写作

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Is winning what counts most important in our life? --- page 16 --- In our competitive world, winning is often viewed as the ultimate goal. We have been told fromayoung age that success and victory are the norms ofaproductive life. But for me, winning is not the most important in my life. While winning can bring temporary happiness and satisfaction, it may not necessarily bring long-term fulfillment or happiness. The pressure to win can lead to stress, anxiety, and an unhealthy obsession with achieving success at all costs. Furthermore, focusing solely on winning can cause people to lose sight of other important aspects of their lives, such as relationships, personal growth, and self-care. Instead of prioritizing winning, we should focus on striving for personal excellence and growth. Setting achievable goals, working hard, and learning from our mistakes is essential for personal development. By emphasizing personal growth, we can create a sense of purpose and meaning in our lives that goes beyond just winning. In conclusion, while winning can be gratifying, it should not be the sole focus of our lives. Personal growth, relationships, and well-being are equally important. Striving towards excellence, being proud of our progress, and regardless of the outcome, is what truly counts.

本篇作文无论是标题还是题目中的提示，都非常清晰地指明，要求大家就"赢是 不是最重要的"这个话题给出观点和理由。所以写作不必过度延伸只需要回答题目的 问题即可。既可以说它是最重要的，给出理由；也可以说不是最重要的，说明原因； 还可以说赢有其重要意义，给出理由，但也要看到它的一些负面影响，比如......; 还可 以说赢很重要但工作和生活中输同样有重要意义，分明说一下原因。这几个立意都可 以，只需要围绕主题分层次说明观点即可。